Jennifer – Trifecta

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It was Jennifer’s birthday.
Mom made her wear that shiny blue dress she hated.
She blew out the candles and Mom collapsed.
“An aneurism,” The doctor said.
I take it back she thought,

That wasn’t what I meant.

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This time the Trifecta editors want 33 words in addition to and preceding the following:

“That wasn’t what I meant.”

Go take a look at the Trifecta Writing Challenge.

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31 thoughts on “Jennifer – Trifecta

  1. Oh. NO!
    we all wish for those words , those moments we wish we hadn’t thought or said it, whatever “it” is.

    but a great take on the prompt.

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    • Thanks. “That wasn’t what I meant” conjures up images, for me, of “wanting a do-over” or “regrets”. This is sort of an extreme example of that.

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  2. Oh dear! The phrase ‘Be careful what you wish for’ never made more sense! Love your take on the prompt!

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  3. Whoa! So you went there. I happen to know some people who have had that thought, though maybe they didn’t use a birthday wish on it. Nicely played.

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    • Thanks for the compliment and congratulations on the your “resilience” win. I laughed out loud at your “tyrant” post this week.

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  4. Our minds went to the same morbid place. But, I love how you left her wish as something the reader gets to assume rather than something that was openly stated.

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