I could say, “It’s me, not you.”
But, that’s not necessarily true.
I listen to what my heart tells me
and now…
My heart is saying it’s time to go
So Ida, adios.
tnkerr-Writing Prompts and Practice
A place filled with mostly unfinished stories. Begun primarily as a direct result of my association with the OC Writer's Guild
tnkerr-Writing Prompts and Practice 
That’s right give Ida the elbow!
No need to keep her hopes up
Enjoyed
@allyatherton
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Clever way to say goodbye. Good luck in the new world that does not include Trifecta. Thanks for sharing your good work woth this community. 🙂
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The heart knows what it wants…so many sad farewell posts this week. MY heart will break 😦
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Nice palindrome. 🙂
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Love the bilingual palindrome!!! Love, love, love the first two lines!
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High praise indeed. Thanks
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😉 Heehee. Love it.
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You handled that very well… No point beating around the bush. 😀
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This is great – I hardly even noticed the palindrome, it flowed so naturally. Those first two lines are killer! 🙂
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Thanks for the kind words.
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“But, that’s not necessarily true.” The most active, passive voice, I’ve ever read. The wit, tone, and speed of thought is acidic here. I feel for Ida, the honesty stings. Nice work!
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Love how you rebutted the clichés! Nice write. Thanks for sharing!
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Happy to. I’m gonna miss this place.
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