Random Scribbles · writing


 Gazing into your eyes is like looking at the sun.
We stare at the distant stars forever and never glimpse their awesome power.
Yet, we peer only briefly at our star. The light too warm, intense, focused, beautiful.
Your eyes are blinding.

The Inaugural Gargleblaster Challenge: Answer the question in 42 words.

What’s so amazing that keeps us stargazing?

20 thoughts on “Stargazing

  1. Very nice! I went with a similar idea, only mine had less warmth. 🙂 That last line is really the crux of it, isn’t it? Great job, and great to see you here!


  2. Such a beautiful love poem. I really like the way you’ve taken that old link between stars and eyes and done something new with it.


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