“I wonder where you go sometimes.” She said.
It wasn’t a question or a demand.
Just a statement, “I wonder where you go sometimes.”
I thought quickly about what she said and how she had said it,
It seemed free of malice, containing no hidden agenda.
Maybe a little like saying, “I couldn’t find good peaches at the market today.”
“It’s just work,
“and I can’t really talk about it.”
“I know,” she said, “I know.”
She turned her attention back to her scone. I went back to The Times.
Thanks all! This is pretty wonderful!
tnkerr-Writing Prompts and Practice 
I love the extent of the thought process, then the short answer. It fits so perfectly with the title. This sentence is a winner: Maybe a little like saying, “I couldn’t find good peaches at the market today.”
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Jennifer, when you like what I’m putting out I know I’m doing something right.
Thank you
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For long-term happiness, “comfortable together” is the very best thing.It doesn’t take any excess words, either. Nice post!
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Yeah I know it’s the best.
Thanks
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Comfortable together and yet apart in that they can’t share their thoughts. I leave this with a feeling of sadness. I love the peaches sentence though.
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Thanks Sarah Ann. Don’t feel too sad about it – I’ve had jobs that I couldn’t talk about before. There are a lot of other things to things to discuss with someone you love. Sometimes it’s good not to have to talk about work. So granted there is a hole, but with the right two people it is easy to walk around.
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I love how this line sets the mood, “I couldn’t find good peaches at the market today.”
And that comfort between two people. The nonchalant conversation, an ordinary day for them. Thanks for letting us into their lives.
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Thanks Jen – Glad you could drop by.
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Oh I love this. I love that you didn’t feel the need to use the whole word count but just took enough to tell your whole story, that one ambiguous, ambivalent, perfect moment.
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Rowan – Thanks for all you do here. Thanks for the nice things you say. I’m smilin’!
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There seem to be several layers to this and yet it has a graceful simplicity. I love how you compare the delivery of her question to that of a banal statement about peaches at the market. Really wonderful, crisp writing, Thom.
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Thanks so much Meg, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Absolutely wonderful, Thom. Such a simple, quiet conversation, with so much underneath it. I like the repetition of phrases, and the soft, casual tone. A perfect little snapshot.
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Thank you Ma’am. High praise indeed. Thanks
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You really captured the essence of “Comfortable Together” here, Thom. Love the peaches!
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Thanks, Like Anita said above, “It doesn’t take any excess words…”
Glad you liked the peaches.
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It almost makes me think that she may be asking where he goes mentally when they are together. It seems like they are apart more than physically. Though the statement is so simple, and he thinks that he means nothing more than a simple statement, it makes me, as a reader, wonder if there is more.
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Thanks Renada – I like your interpretation and questions. Now I’m going to have to give this more thought.
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Perfect.
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🙂 Domo
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Awwww. (I think. unless it’s really indicative of something more disturbing in their relationship, in which case, oh dear.)
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Awwww is good, Michael. Awwww is good.
Thank you.
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Thom this is amazing, too! You’re on a roll 🙂 This is so creative, simple yet deep, and crisp. Was this inspired by Nate’s Coffeehouse post?
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Gracias Tienne. I am glad you liked it. I am pleased with the way it came out although I’m not really sure where it came from. I don’t think it was Nate’s Coffeehouse post but, “one can never be sure. Can one?”
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Quite true! It’s just such an exquisite portrayal of a moment in a day. I re-read it this morning.
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