After losing her head, she realized that the rest of her body was falling apart.
When your head is gone, your eyesight goes too. It’s difficult to look for things when you are suddenly plunged into an inky black darkness and have no eyes.
She wondered how she would ever find her head.
Think.
She thought she should check under the sofa in the parlor. Maybe it was there. Perhaps Buster had taken it.
But she stumbled when she stood to begin her search. It was her left foot – gone too.
What’s happening?
Her right arm dropped as she groped towards the house. The left one hung up in the sleeve of her pajamas for a while. It finally slipped out though, gone too.
Shit!
When the authorities came, that’s how they found her. No arms, one foot, no head, sprawled in pieces on the concrete garden wall. Searchers later found her lost head in the linen closet. She should have looked there first.
I enjoyed this story. I felt her plight. Well done!
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I am so happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks.
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That is where I would have looked first! 😀 Excellent TNK! Thanks for writing again for the MFtS challenge and I hope to see you back next week. Be well… ^..^
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Hey – thank you for the work you are doing here. I’ll keep coming back as long as I’m able and having fun.
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Thanks TN! I appreciate you!
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I might have looked in the microwave or fridge…I seem to get them mixed up when I am absent minded…great story!!
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When I was a lad I could always tell when my grandmother was visiting – I would find the peanut butter in the freezer. Thanks for stopping by and enjoying my story.
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brilliant!
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Gracias and feliz de cinco de mayo.
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What a sad end! It’s always the last place you look (or didn’t look in this case). I loved the title too 🙂
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Thanks – I appreciate that you came to read – your offering this week was bordering on awesome.
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Brilliant – love the title!
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🙂
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I loved how you gave the doll human thinking and feeling. Loved it!
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So glad you enjoyed!
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I did!
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Obvious place really! My Grandmother would say ,”Wash your mouth out’ ~ ight as well do the whole thing at once
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I never look in the right place first. Poor doll.. things did not go well for her.
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It’s always the last place you look. ‘Cause you stop looking when you find it!
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I thought this was an excellent metaphorical take on the image.
So beautifully written. Enjoyed reading your piece.
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How inconvenient. It seems that the old saying about losing your head if it wasn’t fastened on held true for her. Falling to pieces was literal in her case. Funny stuff and well done, T.N. 😀 — Suzanne
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