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Three Hiaku


The first line is written
It’s almost done, and only:

Knit one, purl two; see
Poetry’s like knitting, or
Being an oyster

Earthenware binding
Confined in this flower pot
My roots – constricted

4 thoughts on “Three Hiaku

  1. I like the visual layout and I enjoyed thinking about how poetry is like knitting (true) or being an oyster (yes, being irritated enough by an idea to slowly bring it to beauty and voice like a pearl-lovely).

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    1. Thanks for this. I really appreciate not only that you took the time to read but that you took the time to comment as well. And, such a thoughtful comment. Thanks.

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