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OLWG #17 – American Sentences

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OLWG #17

Naked, sweating, entwined, there are no secrets between us anymore.
*******
I place pen to paper, I wait for inspiration; I wait, I wait.
*******
Staring into your eyes across the table… Like looking at the sun…
*******
What? Another ultimatum? Really? You like this game this much?
*******

My Manuscript, Final Draft

My blood – You see it there between the lines? Does it add to the story?

It was written in a little less than 25 minutes total.

The prompt this week was:

  1. American sentences

5 thoughts on “OLWG #17 – American Sentences”

  4. That second sentence is how I feel every week after looking at the OLWG prompts. I need to stop waiting and get writing. As for the last, under a scene setting title, I fear too much blood might obscure the words.

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