I wrote this for the February 7th Flash Fiction Challenge
The sign on the door read, “The Unwritten Halibut”. She stood just inside waiting for her eyes to adjust to the gloom. This was her kind of place. It was a drinker’s bar. Dark paneling lined the walls; a couple of neon beer signs glowed in the back. A ghost of smoke held up the ceiling in defiance of a local ban. Rainbow colored bottles sat on glass shelves and four or five patrons rested at the bar; staring into their drinks, not talking. The volume was low as Hank Williams sang a hard luck song on the box.
The prompt and instructions were:
In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes a sign. It can be a posted sign, a universal sign, a wonder. Go where the prompt leads.
LOVE the pub name!
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I thought long and hard about that one.
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What a gloomy place. But, your writing is great.
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Thanks
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Great description!
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Felt like I was right there.
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I’ve been in that place! It’s real nice once you get to know the regulars. Well, maybe not real nice, but..
Like especially the smoke holding up the ceiling in defiance of the ban
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TN, I felt drawn to the gloom and silent misery of the place.
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Nice piece, TN.
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