I wrote this for the September 12th Flash Fiction Challenge
She was sixty-three years old that year, but age didn’t deter from her excitement about the gaily wrapped gifts staged beneath the tree. There was one though, that stood out. The wrapping was heavy brown paper. Once wrinkled, but now rubbed smooth, it was an old shopping bag from The Seventh Street Market. A store that had closed almost forty years ago. She’d saved this gift for last and cradled it in her hands turning it over and over. It was rather diminutive, not large.
Neatly lettered in the corner she could read: “Happy Christmas, Clarissa – With Love, Hayley.”
The prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes the greatest gift. Answer it as if it were a question, or show what it could be. Go where the prompt leads you!
Moving and most beautiful.
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❤
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I could really like a “part two” for that one.
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I’m not sure. Hadn’t really thought about it. I’ll see what I can come up with.
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Wonderful.
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Yep, a part two. Clear up the mystery.
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Hayley should be someone very special. Touching
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This is really nice!
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Love where this took you! The emotions ring true with the details that emerged.
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