I wrote this for the September 19th Flash Fiction Challenge
It was early morning when Enrique crept home. Treading softly and turning his key slow; he eased the door inward. He started when a heavy glass ashtray bounced off the wall and shattered. Mesmerized, he watched as pieces of glass scampered across the dark blue tile floor. It brought to mind ‘la galassia via lattea’ it was beautiful. So was the dark-haired fury who came in quick and attacked.
“Ma il mio amore, eravamo in pausa.” Enrique shouted as he tried in vain to dodge her blows.
Marida continued to pummel him. Her fierce countenance set and forbidding.
The prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about an interlude. It can be a pause between two key moments, the pause between acts in a play, an intermission, or a temporary amusement Go where the prompt leads you!
Lovely, TN! Your flash is a fierce work of art with the pauses and Spanish lines. I wonder how long the interlude will last?
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This flash is strong work and a brilliant interlude. I instantly want to know more about these two.
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Thanks. I wanted the relationship to be somewhat… volatile?
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lol @ “somewhat”
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Excellent!
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