I dusted off some old words and reworked them – pared them down for the November 21st Flash Fiction Challenge
Kid Kevin rode into town ‘bout high noon. He tied Ole Paint to the rail at the bank, drew his pearl-handled revolvers, and kicked open the door. The new schoolmarm, Hermione Perkins, was inside.
“Oh Kevin,” she swooned, “Thank God you’re here, Grizzly Hank just emptied the vault.” She gathered her skirts and ran to the door. “He went thataway,” she pointed. “If you hurry you can most likely still catch him.”
Thinking quickly Kevin decided not to become an outlaw today. He mounted up and took off in hot pursuit of the robber.
Miss Perkins might be grateful.
The prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a romance. Focus on the relationship between two people. Build tension and end on a happy(ish) note. Go where the prompt leads!
Oh, yeah. That’s a romance. She swoons and he wants to please her. Love the name Hermione Perkins, too!
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All that’s missing is the antagonists mustache…. Nicely done!
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It was of the handle bar persuasion, obviously. But, I think you knew that. 😃
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Yeehaw! What a way to get the girl!
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and the romance is off and running. Good one!
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A fun read indeed.
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