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OLWG#149- Patience Tempered by the Path of Time

This piece was written for OLWG#149

Beth looked across the
table at her Mother In
Law. She licked her lips

and lied, “I love your
lasagna, Rosemary. The
best I’ve ever had.”

Jim looked at his mom,
then moved his focus to Beth;
then rolled his eyes /cringed.

The prompts were:

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LRose says:

10/04/2020 at 1911

…
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It’s good! But…
I don’t know why I am stymied by poetic form.

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1. tnkerr says:
  
  10/04/2020 at 2116
  
  Is it a poem? Is it ???
  
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johnlmalone says:

12/04/2020 at 1625

sharp and succinct 🙂

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H.R.R. Gorman says:

13/04/2020 at 1647

Jim knows – it’s only a matter of time before Mom breaks him.

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