Written in 20 minutes, with the Carrizozo Writers- Raw, unedited, exactly as it flowed through my fingers to the keyboard
He staggers forth from The Dew Drop Inn
drunk on the heady perfume of whiskey, country music, and whores trying to earn a quick buck.
Daringly he ventures into the darkness, all alone, and
puts slow moving lampposts to good use as props.
Walking sticks to keep him upright.
Unseeingly he passes the night bugs as they fly towards the lamps like screaming Zeros.
Crawling bugs who move across the pavement and along the walls.
He cannot see them but intuitively he knows that some will be be rolling silently in the mud that lies curbside.He slides up the street to where his truck awaits, and
a buttery crescent moon, holding water, floats lazily overhead.
It looks like Cheshire cat, or
the grin of a fool.
Or maybe, maybe like the expression on the face of the magician whose newest illusion
has just worked perfectly.
The crowd is amazed.
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time’s up – step away
The prompts
- a buttery moon
- Is that all
- crawling the walls
wow! I love the vivid descriptions, the creepy atmosphere, and a story about to break ;pretty amazing for 20 minutes work !
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At first I read buttery as butterfly… and wondered.
Now that would be a trick, well maybe not if one had double vision to see a butterfly moon? 😉
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