Written in 10 minutes, with the Carrizozo Writers- Raw, unedited, exactly as it flowed through my fingers to the keyboard
In his twisted mind the twisted memories spun around and around the synapses that stood like signposts and navigational aids to mark the way.
His Mother
his money
his job
his Lovers
his Wife…
And his legacy.
There was even a dog, that seemed to spring from nowhere, she was named Kona.
The man could never have enough
he could never be satisfied
and only the best would sooth his tortured soul
even then, it was only for a little while. The thirst could never be quenched.
He wanted the moon
he wanted the stars
money meant nothing to him.
He had enough.
Pleasure, pain, debauchery.
Those were what he craved,
longed for.
He had forsaken his mother, his wife and the dog
he lived for his lovers and for
experiences with which he was
unfamiliar.
How long could this go on?
There was a twisted man who walked a twisted mile
To reach a twisted house filled with twisted desires
And pain
Pain
There would always be pain – no escaping it.
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time’s up – step away
The prompts
- the greedy man
- twisted memories
I love the energy in this, the tightness of the writing and that couplet with ‘twisted’ repeated four times; one of yr best !
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Reminds me of a few Crime Investigation shows I’ve watched where the character fit 99.99% of what you wrote. And they had no regrets either.
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There are so many such unhappy people. But I think they believe they are happy. Well written.
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I believe you are correct. Thank you.
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