OLWG#65- More of The Micro-Poetry That I Love So Much

Practice makes Perfect

Written for OLWG#65



You never know who your friends are until you need someone to lean on.
##
If she squinted, just so, she could see the truth, see the gleam in his eye.
##
My editors suggest killing off underdeveloped characters.


This week’s prompts were:

  1. you never know who your friends are
  2. if she squinted, just so,
  3. the underdeveloped characters

 

 

Advertisements

Daily Prompt; Silent

Daily Prompt; Silent



She kept silent for reasons that don’t matter; today she spoke loudly.


I’m still playing with American Sentences.

Keep speaking out – make things change!

OLWG #17 – American Sentences

OLWG #17



Naked, sweating, entwined, there are no secrets between us anymore.
*******
I place pen to paper, I wait for inspiration; I wait, I wait.
*******
Staring into your eyes across the table… Like looking at the sun…
*******
What? Another ultimatum? Really? You like this game this much?
*******

My Manuscript, Final Draft

My blood – You see it there between the lines? Does it add to the story?


It was written in a little less than 25 minutes total.

The prompt this week was:

  1. American sentences