Weekly Writing Challenge: The Sound of Silence
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The sound echoed down the hall. He was at it again, pretending to call the game. But, not just any game, no – The Seventh Game of the 1965 World Series. It was always the same game. He got most of the names right and he had the teams right but the winners and the scores changed each time he replayed the game in his head. Aloud – for the rest of us to hear.
It used to annoy and may have even been initially designed to annoy. Over the years though, I learned to anxiously anticipate these games. I could lean back against the bars and listen. It took me away from the monotony that was my daily existence here at Sandoval, waiting to die. It gave me something to look forward to. I could close my eyes and see the pitcher of the day struggling with his slider but sometimes, the pitches were working brilliantly and he was striking out batters one after the other.
On July 17th the game started later in the day than usual. He had a big dinner that he finished first. When it finally got underway it opened normally enough; with the announcement of the starting lineup. Starting pitchers were to be Sandy Koufax, for the Dodgers and Jim Kaat for the Twins. Koufax started with his curve but when that didn’t pan out he had quickly settled into a comfortable routine of fastballs that Minnesota sluggers just couldn’t seem to get the hang of. In the fourth inning Johnson hit one off the left field foul pole giving the Dodgers a lead that would turn out to be the game winner. Two pitches later, Fairly scored, coming home from second and giving Wes Parker an RBI. Kaat was pulled and a string of relievers finished the game for the Twins.
As the contest progressed there were a couple of scary moments for Dodger fans but Koufax went the distance, winding up with a three hit shutout, striking out 10 Minnesota batters along the way. A spectacular pitching performance and a 2-0 result, earning the Dodgers a well deserved World Series win.
The guards came for him shortly after midnight. With his hands and feet shackled he was escorted to the execution chamber. He nodded or waved to each of us as he walked past our cells but the only sound was the chains rattling and dragging on the floor. When the door slammed, a tangible quiet descended on death row. Someone lay back on their bunk and the springs squeaked just a little. I replayed the game I had heard that night in my head as I lay awake in the dark. I guess I would have to silently replay that game over and over, until it was my turn.
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I love the unexpected twists in your work. Always hard to hit the reader with a surprise and you do this. Your work is so fresh.
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High praise indeed. Thank you.
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very nicely written!
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So glad you enjoyed. I’ll tell Rita you said hello when I get there, which should be soon, the way I’m going!
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Wow.
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I hope you are saying “Wow” in a good way. Thanks though – either way.
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🙂 I am! That’s just what I thought after I read this; wow.
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I did not see that coming at all! I had to reread it a couple of times. Wow, that was very engaging and vivid.
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At the risk of sounding foolish it makes me feel really good that you would take that kind of time with my random scribbles. Thank you
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I am so impressed by your writing! I didn’t get it the first time (until the end). Then I reread it and was just wowed! Excellent writing!
Thanks for coming over to my site. How do I link your site to mine? (I’m a new WP user.
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There is a blue button on the right hand side just below “Posts I like” that will allow you to “follow” my site. Is that what you want to do? Thanks for the kind words.
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You’re welcome… and I have followed you now.
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thanks – I will endeavour to entertain!
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I loved your play by play commentary.One has to be proficient about the game to be able to write it as you did. I heard the terms but never bothered to know what they meant. I was happy to see my team players scoring home runs. It was a pleasure reading your post,thank you.
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Thanks to you. Glad you enjoyed the game.
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